I think it looks very nice! You most certainly did a
much better job of it than I could have done.
I don't know if it's steam punk 'proper', since it doesn't look like real brass was involved
and I think it's the smallest ratio of steam-punk-to-actual-usefulness I've seen
-- but then it looks like maybe that's not the style you were going for anyway, this looks more, um, modern than steam.