Criticize Me Please ;)


  1. shotgunfool

    shotgunfool Well-Known Member

    Hey, this is my first attempt at making anything GIF related but i want some good critisism please, imho i think its too jumpy, anyone know how i can remove this?

    Thanks

    Shotgunfool

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    333 Frames later and this is the new result.

    Tell me what you think

    Edit: Changed speed frames appear.

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  2. Robchaos

    Robchaos Well-Known Member

    Nice looking first attempt. once the droid gets down to hero and is jumps on it, that is fine. Can't you just add some frames where he is dropping down.
  3. mia_doa

    mia_doa Active Member

    very nice, I like it the way is.
  4. thetomlin2

    thetomlin2 Guest

    This is exactly what he would need to do ... the more frames the smoother it will move. It will increase the file size though.
  5. spiz

    spiz Well-Known Member

    You spelled destructive wrong as well.
  6. shotgunfool

    shotgunfool Well-Known Member


    Aha What a fail ;)
  7. GAMERIG

    GAMERIG Active Member

    thats super-cool
  8. Edward Turner

    Edward Turner Active Member

    Your hair is too long.
  9. shotgunfool

    shotgunfool Well-Known Member


    Thanks for that ;)

    guess i should have named the title, Criticize my Work please ;)
  10. Mr Marcus

    Mr Marcus Well-Known Member

    I like how when he lands, he turns 'HERO' into 'HO'. I can think of a couple people I might send that image to.....
  11. jasperwill

    jasperwill Well-Known Member

    the top one of him jumping definitly needs to be smoother, the bottom one is pretty smooth, but still a little jumpy.. where would you be using this gif at???
    i would love to see the bottom one being the loading screen for when the phone turns on. the top one i wouldnt like as much for that but i could see other people loving it. (i always like to have a progress bar while loading something.)
  12. meanm50

    meanm50 Well-Known Member

    You should make that first one to say various other devices too. Like have the android squish 'Eris' or 'Incredible'...

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