Obviously I think it's great!
Perhaps you can make some of the other text that is not a Widget, Time etc to be slightly 'blurry' or either 'lighter / darker' just to make your text stand out slightly more.
But not much more, since the more I look at it, your affect is also created very well with the wallpaper typo being similar to your widgets etc.
I know that sounds contradictory, I would still first try the wallpaper text being slightly blurry etc.
You're welcome to send me the wallpaper and I can give it a bash for you, if you prefer.
Cheers